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The Undefeatable Monster
Contributed by
wheelz1324
on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 05:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I Am
Living with a monster
Being put down every day
Have no word or say
Watching myself drift away
I Am
Living with a monster
It would be better if I was in Hell
There is no one to tell
Stuck in an endless Well
I Am
Living with a monster
Love is a one way street
Tears pool around my feet
Just another piece of fresh meat
I Am
Living with a monster
She is my sister
She has no soul
She has no heart
I Am
Living with a monster
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wheelz1324
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2009-11-30 17:56:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Undefeatable Monster
(User Rating: 1 ) by Libertina on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 05:37:53 AM AEST (User
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woah....this is a hard one. If this situation is reality, have my pity on you... and I thank God I'm without any siblings ...;)
However, the poem itself is really well written, I liked it a lot, although it's more of a sad poem and without anger, or so I think.
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