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Beyond the crack
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pondered words
that lie in wait
Beyond the crack
in my minds gate
And in the darkness
that there does dwell
The pain therein
that is my hell
And all the truths
I dare confide
To a soul of sin
and there abide
As whispered words
decide my fate
Beyond the crack
in my minds gate
Copyright ©
wordsy
... [
2003-04-04 18:05:00]
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Re: Beyond the crack
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:48:13 PM AEST
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| Wow!!! Another soul bearing write from an exceptionately talented poet. The way you express yourself in so few words amazes me each and every time. Always perfect flow..perfect rhyme. Hats off to you... and bar keeper.....a drink for my friend on me! |
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Re: Beyond the crack
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 09:24:51 PM AEST
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| nice poem i like this one short and sweet great work.......!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Beyond the crack
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:13:18 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. Nicely written. |
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