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Torn
Contributed by
oceaneyes
on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 01:07:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't think I can describe it through poetry,
Exactly how much you mean to me.
But your hand entangled in mine...
Don't you remember that time
We ran through the parking lots laughing.
Mind, body, soul- grasping
To eachother.
But now you're torn.
Two girls who bring you happiness, my emotions are worn.
She means more to you
We both know that this is true.
So choose her, and please spare
My pain, you know in your heart that I'll always be there.
Copyright ©
oceaneyes
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2009-11-29 13:07:14]
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Re: Torn
(User Rating: 1 )
by shanat on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 01:12:34 PM AEST
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Hey i throught it was really good:))
i look forward to the next one!
welcome to YPDC:)
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Re: Torn
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by Jammy on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 11:42:47 PM AEST
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I Love It! It's a really great start :)
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