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Miss Brown Eyes
Contributed by
Urizen
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Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 12:24:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The red coarse blood flowing through my vein,
These sinews of nerves carry your name;
it is engraved into my DNA
The silent still waters of the Humber and Thames
entice and draw me back to you again
I struggle to write just how beautiful you are
saying Goodnight has never been so hard
It tears me and stabs me and pulls me apart,
Miss brown eyes;
I present to you,
My ever loving heart.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2009-11-29 12:24:06]
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Re: Miss Brown Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 02:44:30 PM AEST
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The tenerness in your lines,is astounding
It's always amazing how that special someone can make you feel so
"Saying goodnight has never been so hard"say it all
truly lovely
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Re: Miss Brown Eyes
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 02:26:33 PM AEST
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This made me cry, this is very very good in my opinion
and reminds me of a time myself.
Well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Miss Brown Eyes
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 06:05:40 PM AEST
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If i've read this right, then i know exactly how you feel....
This speaks to me of a child born then lost.
If I am right, please accept my deepest sympathy x and if I am wrong, my sincere humble apology x
Star x x x |
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