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Contributed by Night_Rzar on Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 05:34:37 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

There was once a Chaos WHO has nothing but darkness
A voice then echoing from the edge of emptiness
Then tip to tip light sprung from nothingness
Embodied the body, heart and soul of this loneliness

There was an angel WHO came down from heaven
Spreading her wings of soft feather of lightness
As when she stepped down the Chaos started breathing
Then heart beat sound then begun has a meaning

Now then this Chaos has a life and beauty
Its color scattered here, there and everywhere
It was the angel who gave life to the king of emptiness
Now the beauty of Chaos seems has no parallel

The Chaos then learned to love
He admired the beauty of the angel from up above
They developed a friendship in this kingdom of happiness
In each others' arm they lie dreaming wonderfully

As days went by the Chaos then realized
That the angel of beauty is now the apple of his eyes
He tried to court he did his very best
But the angel refused and flew up the misty clouds

Tears run down from the lonely eyes of Chaos
It was like a heavy dark cloud pouring its rain
Then lighting burst, thunder and typhoon
Love of Chaos reigning in his own insanity

A Chaos a Heart that was been empty
Then learned to love this beautiful young maiden
She brought back the color in the life of young Marvin
She fixed his heart that was once been broken

But this young maiden vanished
Left Marvin in his lowest part of darkness
How could this young maiden broke his heart?
Heart beat stops by the death of young Marvin

Copyright © Night_Rzar ... [ 2009-11-29 05:34:37]
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