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torn
Contributed by
shanloc
on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 02:00:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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I am nothing special,
I am nothing more than a pack a day,
a fifth every day or so
and a $20 bag every now and again
or more
I am a good man and a great man
a bad man and a worse man
human and divine
I fear nothing though afraid of the things right in front of me
proud to be my father's son, though ashamed of the son I am
ever so proud, though shameful of more than a few things
never really empty, though never really full.
Taken for granted though ever appreciated
not quite done yet,
though waiting for completion
one pack today and part of a fifth and a $20 bag
one more day
Copyright ©
shanloc
... [
2009-11-28 02:00:59]
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Re: torn
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 02:20:06 AM AEST
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| a good dose of humanity and reality great way to start! |
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Re: torn
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by tswilkins on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 09:25:03 PM AEST
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| I say great job. It reflects your title very well, and does well with conveying conflicting thoughts without confusing the reader. I like it! |
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Re: torn
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 08:10:23 PM AEST
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life is one big contradiction, i guess thats the beauty of it, no?
this was an interesting taste in this small segment of your life
take care
-K.Z. |
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