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Shadow of Sorrow
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 09:38:53 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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A shroud of sorrow shadows the sun;
your brown eyes overflow with enigmatic pain.
A darkness casts silhouettes of sadness on the wall;
your smile has transformed into a frown.
Dark thoughts travel in your mind and chase away happy memories;
your laughter has morphed to angry yells.
Your room once bright with joy, is now a dark, lonely cave;
I used to see love in your soul; now a shadow blocks its glow.
You used to look into my eyes and share a thought;
now you hide in your hood and shut me out.
You view the world through a pitch-black lens;
I wish the sun would burn away the darkness.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-11-27 21:38:53]
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Re: Shadow of Sorrow
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by Onslaught on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 11:07:47 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry to hear this, I can relate to both you and him it seems. Unfortunately I have no words of wisdom to help, as I am seeking my own answers even still, I offer condolensces and praise for a well written poem. As always I hope everything works out and gets better. |
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Re: Shadow of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 12:08:46 AM AEST
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Heidi, I am so sorry to hear about this. I really do hope that the sun burns away the darkness.
My Dad died when I was eight years old and I would estimate I was angry about that for over twenty years. I do not say that to make you feel worse or better. I can't make you feel better. Wish I could. But perhaps finding the reason he's like this may bring about some positive results and start him on a road to being happy again. Don't know, I am obviously no psychologist or an expert. Just know I wish the best for you and your family.
Oh, and the poem is very emotional and very well written. It brought tears to my eyes. I respect the fact that you can still write well within such a difficult time.
Take care...really...take care,
Tim |
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Re: Shadow of Sorrow
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by bluestars on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 12:33:56 AM AEST
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Very emotional poem indeed...
Im sorry to hear about whats going on but i was just thinking why wait til he comes around and reaches out to you why not reach out to him...maybe well i hope everything gets better for you.
Thanks for sharing the poem
Best wishes |
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Re: Shadow of Sorrow
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 02:17:00 AM AEST
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| sometimes just being there is the only thing you can do and is the one thing he needs you to do. I'm sure this poem will help alot of parents. |
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Re: Shadow of Sorrow
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by Dereklankford on
Wednesday, 2nd December 2009 @ 11:17:26 PM AEST
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| So powerful, my prayers are with you. |
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