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I Don't.
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 11:31:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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It Takes
Every last fiber in my body
Not to throw my arms around you
And pull you close.
It Takes
Every lingering, last resolve
To rid your smile, your laughter,
Your skin’s allure
From my thoughts
(For long)
And every dream, I dream of you
I forget it’s not the truth
Face first into other dreams, praying
Not to wake up crying.
And I can’t stop, trying
To make you happy
But I don’t love you.
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EternitysLyre
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2009-11-27 11:31:50]
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Re: I Don't.
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 06:25:48 PM AEST
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Such a tangled web we weave for ourselves sometimes....
I love the candor of this poem,
"And I can’t stop, trying to make you happy But I don’t love you."
Why do we do this? I couldn't tell you if i'm honest!
Brilliant write x
Star x x x
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Re: I Don't.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 07:37:03 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this. The tone is very sweet and sincere but you get to the last line and its as if someone slammed on the brakes.
Nice. |
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Re: I Don't.
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by longago on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 05:36:50 PM AEST
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| wow, just wow the amount of emotion and sincerity in this is overwhelming, amazing poem i mean AMAZING serious respect well done :) |
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