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Two to win a heart
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 08:18:37 AM in AEST
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Timing can be sneaky and unpredicted
This is how I fell in my situation
One part deals with personality while the other with sensuality
The guy on the left is sweet, cute,capable of my heart to win
While the one on the right gets under my skin
The one on the left is whom I want my soul mate to be like
But the other is so daring and charming
I couldn't leave him, make him take a hike
This one left my life for awhile
But now is back and has continued with me to beguile
However, the one on the left knows me better
He seems more caring and attention giving
This one could talk to me for hours
While the other wouldn't have a care in the world
But the two both have one thing in common
This trait is called heart throbbing
You see, these two steal my heart in different ways
One is heart-spoken while the others looks take the cake
However, they will never know this is point of view
So for now my little secret is safe within this poem
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Deidra_Carmichael
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Re: Two to win a heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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What a dilemma, eloquently penned.
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Re: Two to win a heart
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 02:14:25 PM AEST
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is it ever possible that there could be a 2 in 1 deal? as in the 'left' and 'right' guys can be embodied in one guy? either way i liked this, girls never cease to amaze me, dont take it personal haha
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Re: Two to win a heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 02:18:56 PM AEST
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I guess this illustrates perfectly why life is so intriguing.
Always full of choices, which one should we take, hopefully the right one yet we only know that when we have taken the choice !!
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Re: Two to win a heart
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 08:54:55 PM AEST
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Ahhhh I enjoyed this one! Well written poem.
Isn't it great to have poetry to send our thoughts to when we do not want to say them out right? Good work
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Re: Two to win a heart
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 12:57:46 PM AEST
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| Thank you for the comments. I find it interesting when people tell me what they may or may have not liked in my poetry. Anyway, thank you for voicing your opinions in a good manner. |
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