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What Felt Like Nothing
Contributed by
sorrowsofabrokenheart
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Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 12:53:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The stars fell from the sky tonight
And I was left alone to tend to myself
Dark beyond any hope of site
I walked blindly through what felt like nothing
Searching for hours for any sign of light
But found not even a spark
I screamed out hoping some one might hear
Then I waited for even just an echo
But I was only met by silance
What felt like a tear ran down my face
For the first time I truely felt betrayed
I fell to my knees and gave up any hope
closing my eyes I looked deep into myself
Retracing every scar
I found a million regrets I never let go
And every mistake I made
The blame I shoulder for what I cant control
Opening my eyes the dark seemed so inviting
But even the darkest nights cant last forever
The sun danced around the sky today
And birds sang such a sweet melody
Every answere became so clear to me
Nothing really matters
If we can live content with ourselves
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sorrowsofabrokenheart
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2009-11-27 00:53:17]
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Re: What Felt Like Nothing
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by Chamaron on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 01:59:24 PM AEST
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| Fantastically cathartic with a wonderful lesson. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: What Felt Like Nothing
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 09:07:36 PM AEST
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even tho it felt like nothing, what u wrote here is something profound.
i've personally had one of those nights many times, and i conclude every time that i'm all i've got
thank u 4 sharing this
take care
-K.Z. |
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