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Luv Me
Contributed by
rainbowstar
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Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do I have to do to make you love me?
How long till you'll ever love me?
Will you ever love me?
What if I captured the light of the world, and lit the darkest hours of your life?
What if I walked across a mountain of sin, just to burn all of your to dust
What if I told you endlessly, how much you mean to me;
more than my life, more than my world, more than anything that I'll ever be able to see
What if I climbed up the clouds, right above the sky, and stole all the glittering stars, just to sweep all your thoughts about suicide
What if I flew up to the heavens, and told God all your dreams..
So one day your dreams will be easier to fuffill, easier than how hard it used to seem
What if I gave you all the blessings of my life, to make your life seem more bright
Or what if one day, you see me lying there without a sound, still looking like I was alright
But when you realized that I had left a note, saying I loved you but goodnight
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Re: Luv Me
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by BetterTomorrow on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 02:19:32 PM AEST
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| I can TOTALLY relate! I've had that feeling for far too long... |
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Re: Luv Me
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by green on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:35:51 PM AEST
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| I AM SADDEN BY YOUR UN DYING LOVE FOR THIS PERSON BECAUSE THEY SEEM UNWORTHY OF YOUR LOVE.EVERYONE NEEDS LOVE AND THAT MEANS U TOO.I ONLY HOPE HE WAKES UP OR U FIND SOMEONE WHO WILL LOVE U AS MUCH AS U LOVE THEM.I HAVE BEEN THERE ALSO AND I HOPE I NEVER HAVE TOO AGAIN ,BUT I DO UNDERSTAND.ONE DAY THE MEMORY OF THIS LOVE WILL FADE NEVER FORGOTTEN WHEN YOU FIND TRUE LOVE MEANING YOU RECIEVE THE SAME AS THE LOVE U GIVE |
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Re: Luv Me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:51:07 PM AEST
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Great write...a pity we can't MAKE others love us.... but you have said it all so well...
Jenni |
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