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A Sudden Rush....
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 07:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Today was the day
I was gonna take you by the hand
look you in the eye
and try to make you understand,
but as I start to talk
emotions got in the way
cause what I feel is so intense
no words could ever explain.
I am
so off balanced
when ever you are near.
All I can do is sigh
as I try to start again
look in the eye
hope you don't notice I'm trembling,
I open my mouth to speak
but no words come out
never had this happen before
I am in trouble there is no doubt.
I get
this sudden rush
of fear,
when ever you are near.
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unknown_utopia
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2009-11-24 19:58:00]
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Re: A Sudden Rush....
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 08:23:59 PM AEST
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Well you should just grab her and let her shake and tremble with you. Some times words just aren't needed.
Beautiful write and I know you know that the only thing we should fear is fear itself.
huggs,
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Re: A Sudden Rush....
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 06:04:41 AM AEST
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This is great reading well done!
I have to agree with everything emy said,
just go for it x
Luv Star x x x |
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