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Quick Wick
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 08:17:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A
Candle
With a radiant
Flame illuminates the
Room. Its warm radius
Gathers guests and their
Shadows manifest. Soon,
Its blue wax melts away.
Its black wick burns out.
Now nothing remains.
Gone overnight.
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
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2009-11-23 20:17:34]
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Re: Quick Wick
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by muskiewoman on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 08:07:17 AM AEST
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A good morning thinker with coffee.
Thank you,
Collette |
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Re: Quick Wick
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 07:01:50 AM AEST
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Now nothing remains. --Just the memory of what was. And so quickly the flame can vanish without us ever noticing. For such a short piece, this is quite thought provoking. Great post!
Seléne ~
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Re: Quick Wick
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 03:45:49 PM AEST
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ahh, so pretty, clever and creative, love how you made the flame,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Quick Wick
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by duff on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 07:45:52 PM AEST
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I like the title and the entire passage works very well. Well done. Another well written piece.
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