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Fly With Me
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 09:19:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Take my outstretched hand, then
Fly with me; I know you can
Fly with me, on golden wings
Take my breath when you sing, and
Fly with me; while the sun shines
Fly with me, for a lifetime...
Your scent still lingers on my skin
This night seems cold; air seems thin
At times like this, my strength I doubt
The sun has come out of the clouds
Turn and look in those beautiful eyes
I think I'm falling and it is no surprise
Could I share this life with you?
Hold me tonight; please make it true.
Turn to me, hold my gaze, and
Fly with me; don't be afraid
Fly with me, don't worry at all
I've got you now, and you won't fall
Fly with me; my lips you kiss
Fly with me, and take that risk
You might find what I found in you...
Fly with me, into the sky
Into the stars, oh so high
Fly with me, on my cloud
By my side, will you stand proud?
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
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2009-11-23 09:19:59]
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Re: Fly With Me
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by DemonQueen on
Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 12:40:08 PM AEST
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| It's a lovely poem and it definitely brought beautiful images to my mind. Thank u for that experience |
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Re: Fly With Me
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by Alphadux on
Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 05:53:35 PM AEST
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| Nice. I don't quite see how it's a spiritual poem, but that's ok. I'm sure that you know what it means though. :-p It's got some pretty decent rhythm too. I'm always picky about that. lol |
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Re: Fly With Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 09:53:46 AM AEST
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Very nice, I especially liked the first stanza, with your clever use of rhyme and repetition.
-Phil |
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