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how it hurts
Contributed by
lostsoul17
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Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 01:58:06 PM in AEST
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why should love hurt
more pain then nessisary
shame and fear
of your own type
no where to run
when your in sight
i love that you hurt me
though i dont know why
the feeling femilure
my life is the lie
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Re: how it hurts
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 06:42:32 PM AEST (User
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Very interesting. Looking forward to reading more.
Deadwriter
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Re: how it hurts
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilpiggiepie on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 07:57:22 PM AEST (User
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i like it though it is a bit confusing to me. but it somehow draws me in. possibly add more to the poem? |
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