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My heaven and my angel
Contributed by
DevilWithAHalo
on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 07:36:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep in the dark she walks through the woods,
The moon glistens behind her on her chocolate brown hair.
Long eyelashes beat back and forth as the summer air whips around her face.
Full red lips pulled into a smile, bright enough to light the darkest room.
Slightly tanned skin, giving out an addictive smell of warmth and love.
Bright blue-green eyes, more perfect than the rarest diamond.
Her slender frame slides in and out of trees with elegance and grace.
This young woman, graced with charm and beauty
Is the rarest sight to see
But when you gaze upon her perfection
You will know just how special she is
For no one else could be born with such radiance
No one else better fitting the name “angel”
The greatest treasure to be held in this world
And she lies in my arms
To serve and protect her
Is my life’s mission
And that I will do
With a smile on my face
And a song in my heart
For being hers
And having her as my own
Is my heaven and she
My angel
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DevilWithAHalo
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2009-11-22 07:36:11]
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Re: My heaven and my angel
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 11:43:16 AM AEST
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Really beautiful and little mystical poem. That woman who you with is incredibly lucky. So keep your angel 'cos she deserves it, according to your words.
Bravo one more time.
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Re: My heaven and my angel
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by MorguesMatter on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 08:22:51 AM AEST
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| She's hot goodness, No but Really your tone as well as your depiction conveyed a perfect vision in your mind I saw the woods the dimonds the elegance of your angel and it touched my heart to know you found true love and that is beautiful-Morgues |
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Re: My heaven and my angel
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by spud on
Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 02:44:49 AM AEST
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Hi,
This is a stunning affirmation of love.
Devoid of all cliches that sometimes permeate
love poetry - unique in its style.
Well written!
Tommy
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