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The Mind of a Teenage Girl
Contributed by
sara
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Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
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I’m just a teenage girl wonderin’
-What will I wear today?
Gotta find something great
Nope that’s a little too Avril Lavigne,
and thats a little too Celine
I’ll never find anything that reflects me,
or who I am, or even who I wanna be,
try the black, crap it’s gotta stain,
now I gotta change,
clothes are so lame,
I swear I’d go naked if it were humane,
clothes drive me insane
I’m just a teenage girl wonderin’ (wonderin, wonderin)
-Who will marry me,
who could it be, well lets see
the guy at starbucks has caught my eye
more than a few times,
I love it how the guys try to staple on their disguise,
mask away there feelings like they’re not real, like they’re not there,
like they don’t care but you know they do,
what about the guy that sits by me in class,
you know the one who stares at my ass,
but hes so cute in his skater boy clothes that
I’ll just have to let it go,
and pretend, once again not to know,
whats going on behind his eyes does he realize?
I’m just a teenage girl wonderin’
-what I’m gonna be,
Strugglin’ now to fulfill my dream
and it’s harder then it seems,
you can’t just call up an A&R
and say “Hey I wanna be a star”
it’s a lot of work,
I think I can do it,
all I gotta do now is prove it, but
I'm just a teenage girl wonderin'
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sara
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2003-04-04 06:05:00]
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 09:53:18 AM AEST
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AT your age you are allow to wonder, and all to soon you'll be grown up and wish to be back in your teenage years.
Good poem!
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:36:30 AM AEST
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What a great poem ! You should post more... i would love to read them. As a comment to the comment above.... I don't know a single woman who would like to go back to her teenage years. Being a teenage girl suck!! Big style!!
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:12:01 AM AEST
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ahhh the teenage years. Seems like a forever ago.
(I'm not that old). This is a good write. I however would rather be 21 for a day again than a teenager.
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:19:37 PM AEST
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| i like this...the last stanza, i really like that, i've always wanted to be a star but i know it's never gonna happen, i sit around and wonder about that all the time...very good... |
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by Desi on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:17:11 PM AEST
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| Your poem is very meaningful. Its not fake, its truely realistic. The mind of a teenage girl. Excellant poem. |
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:39:08 PM AEST
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what about the guy that sits by me in class,
you know the one who stares at my ass,
but hes so cute in his skater boy clothes that
Sounds like me the ass part and all hehe. Good poem u girls always confuse me. And Lucie you are a star your my star. Thanx for sharing this.
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 08:15:12 PM AEST
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APPLAUSE!!!APPLAUSE!!!
Kudos to your honesty!!!! Great mind!!!
Great style of writing! KEEP IT UP!!!!
ANGEL ALWAYS.....GODSPEED! |
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by TundraHydra on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:03:56 PM AEST
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| glad to know what girls think about. That part about guys is not always true. The "disguise" can be the emotions that he wears on his sleeve. Great write |
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Re: The Mind of a Teenage Girl
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by sodapopsuicide on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:54:36 PM AEST
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| oh i <3 this. soooo true, every word!! amazing.. |
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