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Can't Breathe

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 04:46:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I saw the bitter truth
In shatters of the broken heart,
In the moments that passed me by
And I couldn't believe it was you,
The one I hadn't meant so much
To lose someday.
I've played my role in your life
Even though I wasn't the one.
I can't believe it all was
Just the fake, pretending,
I still can't and don't want to,
But I can't hide away from the truth.

I can't breathe becuz of pain,
I can't breathe without you near,
I don't believe it all was a lie
Just one of your foolish games
You loved so much to play.
So I can't believe U never been mine,
And I can't breathe becuz of pain,
Can't breathe unless you're not with me.

I saw the ghost of you
In my dreams I often see at nights,
I was hopin' to see that light
Which I knew I would get from you
But you disappeared without a trace,
Whenever I was gonna hold your hand.
Yes, I've seen the bitter truth
When I'd looked into your eyes
In that my yesterday's dream.
I saw your lips whisperin' goodbye,
But then I didn't get what it'd meant.

I can't breathe becuz of pain,
I can't breathe without you near,
I don't believe it all was a lie
Just one of your foolish games
You loved so much to play.
So I can't believe U never been mine,
And I can't breathe becuz of pain,
Can't breathe unless you're not with me.

I coulda never thought that
We'd fall apart like this,
I didn't mean to believe
That you'd break my heart
And leave me breathless,
Crying out for help.

I can't breathe becuz of pain,
I can't breathe without you near,
I don't believe it all was a lie
Just one of your foolish games
You loved so much to play.
So I can't believe U never been mine,
And I can't breathe becuz of pain,
Can't breathe unless you're not with me.

I can't breathe without you
Here with me...




Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-11-20 16:46:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Can't Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 06:25:13 PM AEST
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Extremely meaningful. I know many people can relate to this.

Deadwriter


Re: Can't Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by DevilWithAHalo on Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 12:51:09 AM AEST
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Wow....I love it. Certainly a very deep and meaningful piece. I know many people feel the same and can relate to this. I loved reading it. Bravo x




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