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Persuasion

Contributed by The_Phantom on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Chill of the dark, consumes a frozen heart,
Suicide the only thought filling my mind,
Give me death, allow me to rest,

" Why the darkened words, why is death the only cure,
Pardon my interuption, but why the thoughts of destruction,
Is this the ansewer, let me help defeat your cancer,"

Who are you, are you some kind of a fool,
This cancer I accept, one wrong word and I'll rip out your chest,
Suicide is the only thing that saves you from my kind,

" My dear sir why so pale, do you think your God has failed,
Why do you pray for death, but grasp for another breathe,
Come in out of the rain, come be freed of your pain,"

Your a fool,enjoying the light, the one that gives you a false life,
Come lay in the fires, give in to your darkest desire,
Come take a life, make misery your wife,

" Forget your thoughts of blood, come enjoy a life filled with love,
Enter the light, for once do what's right,
Take my hand, I can show you, your a great man,"

You speak of love and doing what's right, get out of my sight,
Your words are lies, I can see your weak by the tears in your eyes,
You can't help me I'm insane, by the way what is your name,

" I am Phantom, and humbly I've come,
The tears are for you, and the pain you've been through,
I don't think your insane, I can help you change,"

I will not change, fore I am Kane,
Your tears are worthless to me, they don't mean a thing,
Fore I am darkness, believe me, I am heartless,

" I do not believe, I can help, but first you must believe in yourself,
Let go of your past, come out of your mask,
Listen to what I have to say, and together we can pray,"

Are you blind, your not worth a dime,
Pray, I will not bow before your God, fore he is a fraud,
Fore you are as sick as me, give up the light and join me.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom / Kane




Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2003-04-04 04:35:00]
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Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 05:53:56 AM AEST
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Nicely done, both of you..
Jenni


Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 09:21:49 AM AEST
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I can see the difference in both sides of you This was great work! Christina


Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:24:26 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this. Had a nice flow to it. Very interesting and creative idea. You work well together.
Kara


Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:37:51 PM AEST
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this is amazing...


Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:25:21 AM AEST
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Haunting and dark but wonderfully written


Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 07:48:29 AM AEST
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Excellent .. contrast.. very beautifully written. thoroughly enjoyable, venkat


Re: Persuasion (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 03:44:57 PM AEST
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Excellent poem, both sides of you are so clear, and a very creative idea, i loved this! I have read many of your poems, and you are so talented. Keep writing!




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