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moonlight awakening ,
Contributed by
zarton
on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 04:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can see the moonlight awakening ,
i can see the tear breaking in my heart,
it starts with a flame ending with an emotion,
the powerful potion of your moonlight shines on my heart,
pain and joy of love exploding in the clouds of your mind,
its a clear day now,to take me away from the darkness and pain ,
only love takes it away,the love i see in your eyes,
your smile an happiness inside,take me on your love ride,
love my love enter your heart,
a deep desending fire in the day of the light,the kindness in your eyes,
they lead me astray,
i can see a little angel in your heart,
jumping over the rainbow looking for your love,
i went to the end of the rainbow and found you,better then any pot of gold,
i admire you and send my love,
moving across your body my fingers came to life,
to hold you in the sunset of my desire,
darkness fades and the flower blooms again,
your beautiful face has entered my heart and wont leave my mind,
lightning blasting through the sky is my love for you,
you touched my heart with a look,
now i am aware is your love,the wind whispered i love you....
Copyright ©
zarton
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2009-11-20 04:55:25]
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Re: moonlight awakening ,
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by longhaircg on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 06:59:35 AM AEST
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yes you covered it all just about, I hope it turn out right for you.
warm blessings
sp |
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Re: moonlight awakening ,
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by MoonlightKiss on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 09:32:48 AM AEST
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interesting format
loved the poem and the imagery
it really spoke to me. good job :) |
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Re: moonlight awakening ,
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by jdwright on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 12:45:50 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this very much |
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