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Depression Unavoidable
Contributed by
Michele99
on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 07:41:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Alone
In a sea of people...
Laughing, smiling...
Joy
Not felt.
Awake
In a world of movement...
Forever wandering...
Destination
Unknown.
Alive
In a vessel of uncertainty...
Confusion...
Searching
For something.
Aroused
In faulty situations...
Wanting, needing...
Feelings
Discarded.
Aware
In a life of detail...
Watching, knowing...
Realization
Abandoned.
Asleep
In a continuous daydream...
Fantasizing...
Rejecting
Reality.
Depression. Unavoidable.
Copyright ©
Michele99
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2009-11-19 07:41:21]
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Re: Depression Unavoidable
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by mandipandi on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 07:53:43 AM AEST
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| this is really sad but i like it |
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Re: Depression Unavoidable
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by dirk-velvet on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 10:48:27 AM AEST
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Yep ...
You Nailed It.
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Re: Depression Unavoidable
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 02:23:02 PM AEST
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this should be quoted as the true definition of depression. couldnt have said it any other way.
nice consistent poem structure as well
take care
-K.Z. |
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