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Abyss of Insanity
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 08:26:36 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Plummeting
to the depths of insanity,
descending
to the pits of pain,
plunging
to the perils of despair,
down, down, down,
free-falling in an abyss,
perpetually
Is the bottom in sight?
Hallucinating visions appear
I see an end to this strife--
a razor-sharp spike,
Gravity continues to control my destiny;
reaching the shiny spike
IMPALED!
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-11-18 20:26:36]
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Re: Abyss of Insanity
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by spud on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 04:03:56 AM AEST
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Hi,
I hope this was just a bad dream??
Well written!
Tommy
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Re: Abyss of Insanity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th February 2010 @ 01:56:20 AM AEST
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Gad!!!!! Graphic and scary!!!! I could almost feel the pain.
Freaking nicely done. |
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