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beloved. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:23:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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copious sphere
hanging upon nothing
as if something
into that nothing-ness
dissolved itself
residual. . . I
existing in
seafoam. . . in
spray. . .
path-finder
always
in shifting sands
as darkness falls
I regress
into the setting reflection
exalted. . . into the arms
of the beloved
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-11-18 18:23:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: beloved. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 11:17:47 PM AEST (User
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*sigh* This one is like so many of your great poems. I can read; read it again; then read it several more times and every time I do that, at least from my perspective, get a different take on it. Yet, even with those variations, I kept being remind of this little short story I read about Jesus, called Footprints in the Sand.
As always, your excellence is quite impressive.
Tim
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