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Joy Is Gone
Contributed by
vegastar
on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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To create
to exsist
to give to recieve
to dream
to feel loss
and to gain
to go on without shame
or is it also part of the game
everything hoped for
in your mind remains
reality chokes out its sustain
nightmares never dreamed
haunt you in the day
as time gives way you realize
what you never thought would be
has come true
the darker side has shown through
stealing the joy you once knew
and the happiness inside of you
sorrow each day
becoming part of you
a new reality shows itself to you
pain is real to everyone
so sad so sad
the joy is gone
Copyright ©
vegastar
... [
2003-04-03 22:45:00]
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Re: Joy Is Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:43:05 AM AEST
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| Hey, I've been there too. Hope you'll feel better soon. Anyway, good write. |
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Re: Joy Is Gone
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by BetterTomorrow on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 02:57:36 PM AEST
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| This poem meant so much to me... Thank you very much |
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Re: Joy Is Gone
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:49:58 PM AEST
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| this is probably going to sound wrong but i love this poem, it is on the whole very sad but there is something real and beautiful in the dreams lost within it, it conjures up an image in my mind of a single star in the night sky, sad and lonely looking maybe but also poignant and beautiful |
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Re: Joy Is Gone
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:26:26 PM AEST
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| i feel like you are speaking directly to me in this poem, it has so moved me and touched my soul, it is beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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