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Precious Star
Contributed by
jdwright
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Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:20:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everywhere I look I see nothing but beauty
I now see Stars in the sky which is so moving
The longer I gaze the brighter it shines
for it is the greatest and I want it for mine
This Star makes me feel like never before
it pierced my heart straight through the core
I pray this Star feels the same
that the love I,ve aquired is'nt in vain
There's no other Star that can fill my heart
A fairy tale in motion I'd die if we part
I pray this Star knows how I feel
That feelings I have, have never been so real
So my Precious Star where ever you my be
Know that I love you, and your all I need.
JD Wright
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jdwright
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2009-11-18 06:20:27]
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Re: Precious Star
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:31:42 AM AEST
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JD, you're really on a roll today lol!
This is a really beautiful poem, and
really captures the true meaning of
love we all dream for.
Superb! Luv Star (!) x x x |
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Re: Precious Star
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by jdwright on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 10:33:09 AM AEST
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| I was very inspired |
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