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Here's Your Thank You

Contributed by jdwright on Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:15:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Thank You

I want thank all that said
they'd always be there
I want to commend all those
who said they truly care

I want to give back to those
still standing by my side
Wait! where u going I just
paid him for the ride

to those who have listened
and taken my feelings to heart
I hope when it's all divided
u make sure you get your part

I'll never give up on you
Isn’t that what u said
be sure to study the map
so down the right path your led.

to those I have burdened
and caused much strife
I release you from your promise
go and live your life

to any I may have wronged
and those I truly did
all is now finally over
it's safe to close the lid

to you that supported
and said you believed
you can stop pretending
your finally really freed

I want no one to question
or have a second thought
I want to thank you for the lessons
you allowed me to be taught

I don't want any of you to worry
no matter what you are told
there is nothing left to get
it's already been sold

if in the future my subject
is to come up ever
lie to them all
let the tie be severed

I wish you all the best
and if ever you’re in need
someone's there still standing
and everyone doesn't leave

that the real love and devotion
you so really do need
will be there waiting, of all
your burdens you will be freed.

so relax, sit back
let your mind rest at ease
everything is taken care of
including your total fee.

JD Wright
11/17/2009

Copyright Â© jdwright ... [ 2009-11-18 06:15:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Here's Your Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:25:52 AM AEST
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Hi JD, This is very cleverly written,
and thought provoking. A great read!
Luv Star x x x

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