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Fragile
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 08:35:17 PM in AEST
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A butterfly's powered wings,
a delicate snowflake landing on your skin,
a bubble gliding through the air,
Dandelion fluff waiting for a breeze,
newborn ice on winter's pond,
a human life
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2009-11-17 20:35:17]
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Re: Fragile
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 03:03:51 AM AEST
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This is really nice!
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Re: Fragile
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by dirk-velvet on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 01:41:42 PM AEST
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So lovely, So true.
I sat and thought what could show more,
of being,
fragile.
? ? ?.
And i could not.
Your words and images fell down
perfectly.
(Great Write!) |
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Re: Fragile
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 11:30:10 AM AEST
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| In a word...Wow! A montage of simple, beautiful things with a sledgehammer conclusion!!! One of your best. |
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