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you have me there
Contributed by
longhaircg
on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 11:37:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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wrapped in your dreams I hope I stay,
we share our love so sweet,
looking deep in your eyes your soul I feel,
looking back at me so tenderly,
love is what I see
in your dreams is where you have me,
in your arms so tenderly, kissing me,
filling me, all your love you share,
keeping me there with you at night,
holding me so tight,
as the morning star appears,
the sun comes up again,
I disappear, back to your memory,
so until we meet again,
this love to you I send
to keep you warm at night,
until our dreams take flight
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Re: you have me there
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 12:06:33 PM AEST
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This is a gorgeous read.
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Re: you have me there
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 01:40:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful  |
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Re: you have me there
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 11:59:53 AM AEST
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Susan this so touching, has much feeling, and that's what poetry is all about. It's suppose to take us along with you and your dreams dear.......they are so beautiful, thank you for inviting us along.
Thanking you also for your lovely comment on my poem..
Warm love
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Re: you have me there
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 06:21:15 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and touching write.
Deadwriter
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Re: you have me there
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:21:13 PM AEST
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beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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