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Daddy, Are You There?
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 09:22:50 AM in AEST
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Daddy, are you there
Do you ever stop and stare
Down from the cloud we used to sit on
Where you sang me off to sleep
Daddy, are you there
I miss those hugs we used to share
Oh could you wrap your arms around me
If I wished it, one more time
Daddy, are you there
I miss your tender loving care
Your smile will always be imprinted
On my heart till ends of time
Oh Daddy, are you there
Is that you sparkling in the air
The heart shaped star, left of the moon
You'll never know how much your missed
x x x x x
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by joydeep_nath on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 07:30:15 AM AEST
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| touching!! |
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 01:55:14 PM AEST
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Very good, very powerful. I especially liked this bit:
'Do you ever stop and stare
Down from the cloud we used to sit on
Where you sang me off to sleep'
Nicely done!
-Phil |
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by karoody on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 05:03:15 PM AEST
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A touching and beautiful piece
I am sure he is watching
And smiling too
Smiles and hugs to you
Kara |
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by eternityandaday4u on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 10:52:46 PM AEST
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wow... i love it!
:).... eternityandaday4u |
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by MoonlightKiss on
Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 09:30:24 AM AEST
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aww this is so sad :(
it made my heart ache.
great job, the best of
the best poems bring
out emotion in the
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by jdwright on
Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 12:45:48 AM AEST
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| that got me cause I do the same thing...... |
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Re: Daddy, Are You There?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 11:36:31 AM AEST
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losing someone almost never settles right
even when you know that someone is gone
it's always like a dream
the soul the spirit are amazing forces
It seems they move the world and never leave us
honorable topic,and write
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