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Contributed by
Scootsy
on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 01:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sun rises, brightens your face,
Water-kissed lashes, dazzles mine eye,
A beauty, I do not shield,
A beauty I can not deny.
My eyes, drawn to magnificent features,
My hands, longing to caress,
My voice, like a preachers',
Unwilling to transgress.
You speak, I pay attention,
You cry, I care,
You laugh, I am without tension,
I cannot feel despair.
Our hands, fingers intertwined,
Our eyes, locked together,
Our thoughts, as one mind,
Lighter than a feather.
We stand together, forever,
Lost in a world of our own,
For you I will endeavour
To give you a world you have never known.
Copyright ©
Scootsy
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2009-11-16 13:01:46]
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Re: You
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by karoody on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 01:32:44 PM AEST
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You may be new to the poetry world
But you certainly are well-acquainted with the pen
You have drawn your thoughts and feelings
Very well here
Welcome to YPDC, by the way
Smiles,
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Re: You
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by shelby on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 09:48:33 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
Well you could have fooled me as far as new to poetry! I enjoyed this, lots of great lines and word usage, the flow is wonderful. Good work!
Michelle
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Re: You
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by Scootsy on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 10:44:42 PM AEST
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Michelle, Kara,
Thank you both for the greeting and the kind words; I must admit that I uploaded the poem with some trepidation, but you have set my mind at ease. :)
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