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STUPID IN LOVE

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 05:00:54 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I've given all I could give
For love I thought was real,
I've given too much, too much,
But now I feel it wasn't enough.

I meant to know that the one,
Whose hand I was gon' hold for all my life,
Would be the one I ever dreamed of,
But how it's turned out,
That the person can be mistaken.

He's never been honest to me,
He's never given me the things
I've always really needed.
I wanted this eternity with him,
Only he didn't mean it so much,
He didn't accept such perspective,
Though I was stupid in love
So stupid in love...

I've found out from my friends,
That he'd been gone and cheap
With the loose women
While I was waiting for him
Almost to 4 in the morning.

He gave me no explanation,
Though he knew I know everything,
He said it's gossips of the friends,
Which, ostensibly, know nothing.
He hasn't even realized that
He's got caught on lie.

He's never been honest to me,
He's never given me the things
I've always really needed.
I wanted this eternity with him,
Only he didn't mean it so much,
He didn't accept such perspective,
Though I was stupid in love
So stupid in love...

I saw the shadows of the fraud
But I didn't wanna believe in,
I was an idiot, such an idiot,
Putting my trust in hands of him.

How could I be so stupid?
How could I not see
That he was lying to me?
Maybe, love always get us blinded,
Making us so stupid in love.

He's never been honest to me,
He's never given me the things
I've always really needed.
I wanted this eternity with him,
Only he didn't mean it so much,
He didn't accept such perspective,
Though I was stupid in love
So stupid in love...

Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-11-16 05:00:54]
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Re: STUPID IN LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 06:24:12 AM AEST
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This is a very emotional piece, and I have been here before myself. The pain it causes really hits so hard. Thankyou for sharing your great writing Alexa x x x

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