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We Used To Have A Rabbit
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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We used to have a rabbit
And Blossom was her name
They said she was a DWARF lop eared
But ginormous she became!
She ran in circles round our legs
Oh, how she made us laugh
But it started getting silly
When she found a darker path!
My carpet ruined round the edges
Chewed to shere thread bare
The BT line, my plant, so unkind!
And no, it didn't stop there!
The time came for a change
A new sofa on the listing
But when the council took the old one
The back of it was missing!
Oh yes, the times she'd clean the dust
With her fur on the pipe behind the toilet
It saved me a job, but something else she would rob
Oh she'd just have to go and spoil it!
My poor old flat, I said "that was that"!
Even though we loved her so
I found her a home not far from us
Now she lives with my cousin Joe!
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Re: We Used To Have A Rabbit
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 10:47:18 PM AEST
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| had a real giggle over this love the verse about the sofa lol great fun |
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Re: We Used To Have A Rabbit
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by joydeep_nath on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 07:52:00 AM AEST
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| sad 2 abandon old pets...cant say anything more..:( |
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Re: We Used To Have A Rabbit
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 01:59:33 PM AEST
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| Very humorous, if I must say so. This can describe many pet situations(Marley and Me, Beethoven's 1-5 etc) |
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Re: We Used To Have A Rabbit
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by Recyclebin on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 07:58:00 PM AEST
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LMAO.. I love this.... I really adore people who have some light humor in there writing. I can't believe you didnt get more comments.
This piece deserved more attention.
Thanks for sharing a smile.
~Bin~ |
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