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The Woman In The Window
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The room surrounded by darkness
A shivering cold wandering
The skin icey blue
And the eyes so empty
Open mouth, dried lips
Muffled sounds from the world around
Brain in a slowmotion
Who is this woman staring at me
From the window inside
A frail look, hair a mess
She looks so old but yet so young
Fragile hand touching the skin
I feel her hand on mine
Her eyes with such a sadness
I feel her pain deep within me
I take a closer look
At the woman in the window
I recognise her eyes,
The shape of her face
Could this really be?
Confused and sad
I look back at the woman
As tho she is a ghost
She shows me the movie
Of the past, the present and the future
The movie of this woman shocks me
Those images shown, portraits a memory
As I look again I see the reflection
I'm staring into the window,
I am her, she is me, I am,
The woman in the window
~~ Nats ~~
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Re: The Woman In The Window
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 09:24:30 PM AEST
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Re: The Woman In The Window
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 04:40:56 PM AEST
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Wow Nats, you really have me speechless with this one (so a good job that I'm allowed to type a response).
I think this is possibly the best you have ever done, it is certainly powerful and intense stuff.
Fantastic.
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Re: The Woman In The Window
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 02:12:29 PM AEST
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Such a well written poem.
Take care
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