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Hawaii

Contributed by Elvis on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:31:38 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I was thinking of coming there as a person that never ever visit's
your strange land but then I thought for a minute and remember
once a long time ago in a life that has long been for gotten and
past that I use to own several homes there and buildings and
strange islands fill with exotic plants and animals long long
ago in a distant past when I rode the waves with my famous
fish named flipper we use to go out on the ocean together and I
was remember when I was in a TV show there call Hawaii 5’ O
a long long time ago then all of a sudden in a flash of light it
seemed my whole life there disappeared as this sort of famous
actor of my youth in a place I call my home I was like a King
there you know like Don Ho like Elvis Presley him self I use to
ride the waves here and as a Naval officer I use to be a Marine
you know and well if you think maybe your mom or dad might
of knew who I was back when I own the Spam company and
made all of those strange dishes from it who am I do you know
is anything I owned still there ? I remember I brought this little
island there long ago Maui do you know of it ? who am I Jim I
say Jim I say in deed a older person now but I'm coming home
soon I think as soon as I can get the direction to my homes
their where this transmission might landed and if you get it
soon please send the information as soon as you can who was
I do you know can you all remember that time so long ago

Copyright Â© Elvis ... [ 2009-11-15 14:31:38]
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