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You Have Endured
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 01:58:49 AM in AEST
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What then
Have you come back with
With all of your journeys
Into the Darkness
That you think
somehow hold the Key
To all of the
Suffering, which
You have endured
What then
Can you now tell me
That you didn't know
before
Beside the fact that
You have endured
What then
Is now so different
Since you've gone
And dug your way
Back to the rest of us
Except that
You have endured
What then
Makes you dive back in
Keeps you perpetuating
The state of stasis
That keeps you paralyzed
Exploration that eats you alive
Which
You have endured
What then
Do you live for
When all of your Life is
Spent pondering what
You have endured
How much longer
Are we supposed to endure
All of the things
You have endured
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Re: You Have Endured
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:05:46 AM AEST
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This is very good! Builds up to a perfect question...
What then
Do you live for
When all of your Life is
Spent pondering what
You have endured
How much longer
Are we supposed to endure
All of the things
You have endured
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Re: You Have Endured
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:31:39 AM AEST
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yes this is very good.
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Re: You Have Endured
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:54:52 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh! This really speaks to me!
It's almost creepy the way I've interpreted
it to fit a situation I once had with someone.
Fab writing. I want more!!!
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