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If I Could Read Your Mind....
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 07:54:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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If I could read your mind...
Would I be there?
or
Would it be the girl with the blond hair?
How many thoughts of me are resting on the clouds in your mind?
Am I on the lone cloud surrounded by a myriad of your dream girls?
Who are you really touching when you touch me?
Is it the naked brunette I can feel you thinking about as you devour me?
If I could read your mind...
would I be there?
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2009-11-14 19:54:19]
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Re: If I Could Read Your Mind....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 08:17:53 PM AEST
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| Brillant yet heartbreaking poem. Good work! |
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Re: If I Could Read Your Mind....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 08:17:54 PM AEST
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| Brillant yet heartbreaking poem. Good work! |
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Re: If I Could Read Your Mind....
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:29:37 AM AEST
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This is very good.
Take care |
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Re: If I Could Read Your Mind....
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:25:54 AM AEST
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I like the way you capture the very
thoughts so many of us have.
Fantastic writing x x x |
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