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death
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 07:05:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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darkness folding
and unfolding
asking stone
moon answers
with isolated
beauty falling
through air
seeing celebration
the path of death
soft with decay
the cold blew
everywhere
stepping into
and out of
time.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-11-14 19:05:40]
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Re: death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 12:38:25 AM AEST
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| I really liked this one. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: death
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:41:30 PM AEST
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This is one of your best poems I think. I particularly enjoyed this little bit:
'asking stone
moon answers'
The moon made of stone really got through to me.
-Phil |
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Re: death
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by MorguesMatter on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 12:24:22 PM AEST
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| This poem is powerfully menacing(soft with decay)What a line you've truely mastered your gift to personify the vision of death standing in a cold black wind by moonlight is chilling!-Morgues |
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