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Everlasting Moment

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 01:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



My heart is torn in two that's true
All because I'm no longer with you
The way that you are and everything you do
Makes me feel hurt since I can't have you
We used to be the closest together
But it seems we now have nothing to weather
Can't we just turn time back to the way it used to be
When life was so easy and we were free
oh please tell me where we are now isn't reality

Do you remember the time we were so honest with each other
We would always laugh and talk like lovers do
Do you recall the day we were reunited
Once again we were back in each others arms
How your warm embrace tamed the anxiousness in me

That was just a stitch in time
A one time chance for us to rediscover what was lost
If only we could stay that way forever
If only that could be an everlasting moment





Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2009-11-14 13:49:56]
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Re: Everlasting Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 04:26:34 PM AEST
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Know this feeling very well, great poem
Take care


Re: Everlasting Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:15:15 AM AEST
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I really like this poem.
Great writing x x x


Re: Everlasting Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:45:02 PM AEST
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Splendid writing, it had warmth and plenty of sentiment I thought.

(Sentiment's a great word, don't you think?)

-Phil


Re: Everlasting Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 06:21:49 AM AEST
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an emotional read for me i can def relate..thanks for sharing !


Re: Everlasting Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 03:41:16 AM AEST
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What an honest and vulnerable write.
Well written indeed. Full of emotion!




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