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She is not me any more
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 03:28:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Was I wrong to say I love you?
Was I wrong to say I care?
I did,back than,yet now
I am sorry but you are not the one.
Forgive my rude remarkes,
I just need you to leave.
Forgive my impatience,
what you say means nothing to me.
I am afraid I am cold towards you,
you did me no harm,
just cant........love you.
Dont force me to break your heart even more.
Go on and close the door.
That girl your looking for
does not exist anymore....
Copyright ©
LadyRose
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2009-11-14 03:28:50]
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Re: She is not me any more
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 04:48:02 AM AEST
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This is very heartfelt, not heartless. I really like the way you are so brutally honest.
Great writing, take care Last Star x x x |
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Re: She is not me any more
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by nyce on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 05:25:13 PM AEST
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| Oo that was great...amazing job |
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Re: She is not me any more
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by JT on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 05:50:22 AM AEST
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| it takes alot of heart to be honest. -JT- |
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Re: She is not me any more
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by blackroses_bleedinghearts on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 06:29:37 PM AEST
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honesty is the best way out.
loved the brutality of it, by the way |
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