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rag doll
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 08:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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riddled grin
broke jointed
twisty
tangle-thicket
mane
toe dropped
sliding
sink & horded
pain
bound awkward
strange.
mute me
notched
and angled
high to hard
corrupt
entrance
adored
outcast
neglected
on the floor
Oh-so-bored.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-11-13 20:53:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: rag doll
(User Rating: 1 ) by anomalei on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 05:15:46 AM AEST (User
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i like this. i think i would describe this as... whimsical? a fun read nontheless. =]
you are fantastic!
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Re: rag doll
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorguesMatter on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 12:36:29 PM AEST (User
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Falling apart at the seams, I see your metaphor clearly the weak link surley will bring us all down chain reaction-Morgues |
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