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A Black Hole Abyss
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 06:38:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A black hole abyss
What is this?
It has taken the place
That you used to make race
You tore me apart
You took my heart
Now only an abyss is left now
Black hole of emptiness
All that I am
Eating at me from the inside
A heart beat I just can’t find
Why is this?
Deep black abyss
Taking over me
Eating at me from the inside
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
... [
2009-11-13 18:38:50]
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Re: A Black Hole Abyss
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 07:50:10 PM AEST
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Yeeesh, I wonder if some Mylanta would help with that. 
Anyways, pretty good, Kelly. A bit graphic and scary
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Re: A Black Hole Abyss
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 03:16:43 AM AEST
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I just like this.
Take care |
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Re: A Black Hole Abyss
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by elle on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 08:05:42 PM AEST
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| Greetings Kelly, from the event horizon. Nothing is ever the same after it passes here. Nice one. elle :) |
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Re: A Black Hole Abyss
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by ChaosFactor on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 02:02:11 PM AEST
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Wow. Just wow.
Great description. Very graphic. |
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