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How to your heart
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 01:05:40 PM in AEST
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Everyday its you I see
Wondering if you're ever thinking of me
But considering the time I saw you last
The truth has finally come to pass
You heard from a friend who heard from a friend
That I was crazy about you and it would never end
That same exact friend said to me then
I now must change who I am
I responded that it was something for which I wouldn't stand
But I would perfect myself the best I can
While thinking of how I'd win you over
I realized I would need more luck than a four leaf clover
But surely you must understand
Physical traits fade quickly such as looks and glam
It's the inner person who wins someone's heart
Not the looks which make you popular and top of the charts
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Re: How to your heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:39:51 PM AEST
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Very true, we've all just got to be the very best version of ourselves. Anything else is just a falsehood.
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Re: How to your heart
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 11:10:05 AM AEST
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This is very true
But surely you must understand
Physical traits fade quickly such as looks and glam
It's the inner person who wins someone's heart
Not the looks which make you popular and top of the charts
Take care |
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