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gray safe narrow
Contributed by
muskiewoman
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Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 11:22:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lives rough tumble life lost and alone
Tempting vivid colors pull time in
Lacey scraps lost look for weary end
Muddled sensation empties tattered remains
Dreary limp body dangles by life’s thread
Dread calloused emotion of life’s withering end
Rips thorny life down empty cruel path
Suffocating emotion longs gray safe narrow
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2009-11-13 11:22:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: gray safe narrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 06:37:31 PM AEST (User
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Great word choice. It seems to have a tone of sorrow. I will have to read more of your writing. Nicely written. |
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Re: gray safe narrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorguesMatter on
Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 12:24:54 AM AEST (User
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I see fog sifting the earth slight breeze what a gloomy scene. Fascinating-Morgues |
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