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The Outcast
Contributed by
Mamen
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Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 08:51:16 AM in AEST
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The Outcast
Hiding from piercing light’s exposure,
Abiding by peaceful night’s composure.
Vision blurred by tears,
Path obscured by fears.
She is a rolling mossy stone
No place
No place
She can call home.
Her pretty face pale with grief,
Her mind’s at race with no relief.
Faith shattered being betrayed
Hope shattered being dismayed.
A space among others was all she wanted.
No space
No space
Was all that was granted.
Copyright ©
Mamen
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2009-11-13 08:51:16]
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Re: The Outcast
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 09:27:06 AM AEST
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How terribly sad, but beautifully written.
Thankyou for sharing it with me x
Keep them coming.....
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Re: The Outcast
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 10:42:47 AM AEST
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I love the rhyme scheme.
This also bring to mind a novel I read recently.
Thirteen Reasons Why |
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Re: The Outcast
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 03:06:47 AM AEST
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| very sad, very good |
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