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Bring Me To My Knees

Contributed by Jay_Pat on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 11:46:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I've got no reason for broken wings
When I see you, my heart sings
You're the one for me
Without you I feel
I can't breathe

She's the bullet that brings me to my knees
The girl that makes me say "Please baby, please"
It's hard to see through all the trees
Sometimes your words sting

Blood drips down, from my face
Can't you see we all make mistakes
I try to do things by the book
Cause if I don't you don't even look

She's the bullet that brings me to my knees
The girl that makes me say "Please baby, please"
It's hard to see through all the trees
Sometimes your words sting

I sit and watch you walk away
Under my breath I whisper
Don't go, don't stay away
I need you here with me

She's the bullet that brings me to my knees
The girl that makes me say "Please baby, please"
It's hard to see through all the trees
Sometimes your words sting



This is the original it was originally intended to be a song for my band but we had differences and broke up. Yes it is a screamo song and the caps are where the screams would be.



I've got no reason for broken wings
When I see you, MY HEART SINGS
You're the one for me
Without you I feel
I CAN'T BREATHE

She's the bullet that BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
The girl that makes me say "PLEASE BABY, PLEASE"
It's hard to see THROUGH ALL THE TREES
Sometimes YOUR WORDS STING

Blood drips down, FROM MY FACE
Can't you see WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES
I try to do things BY THE BOOK
Cause if I don't you DON'T EVEN LOOK

She's the bullet that BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
The girl that makes me say "PLEASE BABY, PLEASE"
It's hard to see THROUGH ALL THE TREES
Sometimes YOUR WORDS STING

I sit and watch you WALK AWAY
Under my breath I whisper
DON'T GO, DON'T STAY AWAY
I need you HERE WITH ME

She's the bullet that BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
The girl that makes me say "PLEASE BABY, PLEASE"
It's hard to see THROUGH ALL THE TREES
Sometimes YOUR WORDS STING

SHE BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
SHE BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
SHE BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
SHE BRINGS ME TO MY........
KNEES




Copyright © Jay_Pat ... [ 2009-11-11 23:46:58]
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Re: Bring Me To My Knees (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 03:09:28 AM AEST
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For me this is a great poem, i understand what jealousy can do.


Re: Bring Me To My Knees (User Rating: 1 )
by nyce on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 10:51:48 AM AEST
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your really talented.. I fully understand the feelings




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