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Ageless
Contributed by
elle
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Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 08:42:32 PM in AEST
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Pretty little princess
the pink has left your face
& mourning, now approaches
wrinkles' fond embrace.
I'll trade a smile for longing
& shed times' swift reply
to see you safely harbor
the twinkle in your eye.
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-11-11 20:42:32]
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Re: Ageless
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 09:09:53 PM AEST
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what depth this piece has! short yet nicely done poem
take care
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Re: Ageless
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by ming on
Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 08:59:42 AM AEST
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Nice ryhme, which normally I don't dig!
ming |
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Re: Ageless
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by ming on
Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 09:01:16 AM AEST
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| LOL! Typo Queen...RHYME! |
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Re: Ageless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 06:24:16 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and profound. |
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Re: Ageless
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by karoody on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 10:53:31 AM AEST
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such a beautiful and touching piece
this touched my heart
in so many ways
Hugs
Kara |
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Re: Ageless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 05:37:23 PM AEST
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oh elle, this is gorgeous! And yes, as others
have stated, very profound.
*sigh* to remain ageless ... that's the trick right?
Your pen blends beauty so well. :)
~ Breezy
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Re: Ageless
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 06:18:43 PM AEST
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Behind the wrinkles the twinkle always remains!!!!
Tim
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Re: Ageless
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 01:25:32 AM AEST
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| Ssssh. Don't tell anyone but I often come back and read your poems. :) |
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