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Little Eyes

Contributed by Minz on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 04:21:20 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Little eyes swollen shut it hurts to sleep

Awaken routinely alone

No desire for today to be any different no chance

You call and you seek but no response

Tears fill those little eyes

It burns like acid it hurts my little eyes

There is no single moment seized through time

Although each second seems lost

Little eyes watch valuable clock hands wave goodbye

I decided to take the red brick road

So far from home so far from yellow

So much to learn so much of Neverland to still be conquered

Once you leave there is no return

Even though you still have your little eyes

Just breath its going to hurt

But don’t blink you need to see whats happening

Once it's accepted my little eyes will sew themselves shut once and for all

Copyright Â© Minz ... [ 2009-11-11 16:21:20]
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Re: Little Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by 143 on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 05:02:41 PM AEST
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"I decided to take the red brick road
So far from home, so far from yellow"

That highlite was so TRUE!
I really enjoyed this writing...

What if our dreams were the next days reality
what if out teams were unbroken melodies
what if how we were tough made us strong
while moving on up and moving all night long

What if our muscles were as strong as our mind
would we last forever and never even die
what if we could forget a new pain brought to us
throwing it away like nothing ever was
what if we all could do as you do
for this I say now, your writing inspired me writing these clues...

Take care: 143

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