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The Answer To My Life
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 04:12:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I turn around and smile
They never look at me
I'm missing for a while
They never notice me
I cry myself to sleep
Feeling so lonely
Just trying to find the answer to my life
It seems like yesterday
I was a baby
A gifted little child
Who wondered maybe
I sang myself to tears
When they betrayed me
Just trying to find the answer to my life
The pictures of my life
Are just a memory
Our images of life
Are just a fantasy
The waves that ride the tide
Are filled with mystery
Just trying to find the answer to my life
Just trying to find some answers to my life
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laststarontheleft
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2009-11-11 16:12:09]
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Re: The Answer To My Life
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by MorguesMatter on
Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 12:04:59 PM AEST
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| This poem is so real, The feeling of being unoticed is murderous to the soul-Morgues |
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Re: The Answer To My Life
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by Anu on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 12:16:17 AM AEST
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| Aww..that was sadd....though very well written..i feel sometimes we should just Act rather than think to get the answers.. :) Best Wishes :) |
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Re: The Answer To My Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 09:52:31 AM AEST
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And then she grew into a gifted adult.
One of the things about a great poet is that they can invoke emotion with their poems. This one did exactly that!
Nicely done. Thank you for for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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