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My brother, my lover, my friend
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 03:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We know each other enough to see
That truly we can never be
My feelings for you shouldn't be explained
For if I do they would be said in vain
There's a girl I know who's after you
My biggest fear is that she''ll take you
Then leave you with heartbreak and pain
I will never forget the day we met
That day I met a wonderful creature
One with gold locks and beautiful eyes
Someone such as you should be held dear
At least you can know that I do
The only problem is you don't feel the same
To you, I am child, a little girl
Oh well, do as you want
I'll keep on living as I should
I shall also treat you as precious
The one on whom I can depend
It is as if you were
My brother, my lover, my friend
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2009-11-11 15:13:25]
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Re: My brother, my lover, my friend
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 03:33:15 PM AEST
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you penned your emotions very well
beautiful write
best of luck
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Re: My brother, my lover, my friend
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:46:37 PM AEST
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Nicely composed, you've certainly got talent.
-Phil |
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