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What's a Tree?
Contributed by
KenSears
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Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 02:39:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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What’s a tree?
Well, it’s not a horse.
It’s not a lake or a waterfall.
It’s not a volcano.
A tree isn’t an eagle or a star.
It’s not a pyramid or church steeple.
Not a soft breeze.
It’s no dream, regret or plea.
It’s not a silver mirror.
It’s not a circus clown.
A tree isn’t your parent’s voice or child’s cry.
It isn’t hope or despair.
It isn’t you, of course.
A tree is not a cozy hearth,
Nor a poem;
Neither page nor words.
A tree is surely no abyss;
You’ll find no all-consuming black hole there.
No, a tree is not that.
Now the rest, you can figure out.
Copyright ©
KenSears
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2009-11-11 02:39:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What's a Tree?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Xnoybis on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 06:47:04 AM AEST (User
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The extra commentary made me read it. The words made me care.
Twisted just enough as you fall down the lines to keep you in there for the finale, which I loved. |
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